Never was one willing,
shading colours from the day
Hues in all their glory
as the sea bobbed them away
Never was one calmer,
listening to bows and hush
Where luminous bounced off the streets
in mad and virtual rush
Never was one sinking
as they looked up to the skies
Captivating diamonds
hosted under midnight guise
Never was one more inclined
to meet up after dark
Slipping out to greet the moon
and count the ripple marks
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6 comments:
Did you write this? I don't usually 'get' poetry but this is ace. Especially love the last stanza, I almost feel like running out and heading for the lake. Its about 1 am here, so probbaly safe to skinnydip too.
i like the captivating diamonds
Helena, what a very delicate and artfully written piece. Love your phrasing, esp. in the opening and closing stanzas.
Ooh, so romantic and a little naughty methinks! Love it!
I'm not really into romantic verse but there was not really any other way to go with this pic! Thank you all the same.
ultra romantic. the repetition
adds to the flavor.
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