No rules that obligate us
No missions we can't solve
Stationary roads ahead
Let sun and moon revolve
What happens to us, happens
Give it our biggest shot
Raining down on reigning us
More pennies in the slot
So what if skies are heavy
Accepting the sublime
We'll reason, judge, appreciate
While journeying our minds
20 comments:
great poem thanks for sharing
This just rips right along...great meter and rhyme (big fan of that). Cool message too....great job. By the way...you have a most interesting blog....an eclectic collection of funny stuff! See you next time. Vb
love the flow.
Happy Rally.
:)
you rock.
love the flow.
Happy Rally.
:)
you rock.
Love the flow and freedom described in your poem - thanks!
never felt limited during my "housewife" years.
so many options avaiable!
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/05/05/soldiers-like-johnny-and-dusty/
So what if skies are heavy
Accepting the sublime
We'll reason, judge, appreciate
While journeying our minds
So poignant!
Very well said.. I love your blog template too.. haven't I said that already.. :)
Many Hugs xox
Interesting wordplay, thought provoking but fun!
I like the optimism of this poem.
I love the way you express the truths of ourselves in the world, and how earth and people correspond in this living world. Beautiful piece, very correlated to the living physical world. Well done!
Thought provoking content, packed into a smooth and inviting read.
Great poem, great meesage. I love the almost ke sera sera yet still optimistic feel to it.
The Lonely Recluse.
your like a fine wine, you get more beautiful with time....
This was so thoughtful and pretty-I thoroughly enjoyed it!
I love the pic for this, is fits the feel of the words so well. Stop in & read Decisions
Awesome picture and a great poem. I wish I had more of this attitude when my child was younger. I'd have fewer grey hairs now!
As a house husband I can relate, even if I'm the wrong gender. :D
great poem. we have to just keep on keepin' on.... awesome words.
blessings!
JM
Nice, quick pace. Love your voice and style.
Wonderful meter, excellent rhyme scheme - not forced, but witty and enjoyable. Well done!
My entry:
http://paulatohlinecalhoun1951.wordpress.com/2011/04/27/an-explanation/
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